Monday, January 10, 2011

Literary Focus " Camp Harmony"

#4 : Analyze Sone describes her mother as " poetic and yet so practical." State one example from the text that illustrates each quality. 

  • Poetic: She was very happy when she saw dandelions growing up on the floor and she didn't let anyone pick them up. She wanted to plant them and wanted to open the garden in their room where the dandelions grow.

  • Practical: Mother and Father roamed out to see what folk were doing. They found people wandering in the mud. She was happy because the latrine is right there and she didn't need to walk far. 

2 comments:

  1. Sarryna

    This is great for your first blog post. I like how you organized your work. You need a little help on your grammar but its okay, i can help you improve.Don't worry your great, and keep doing what your doing.


    Kristine Nguyen
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  2. Sarryna this is awesome. I really like the organization. It's really easy to understand your ideas because of that great organization. One thing to improve on is explaining your answers more. Why are dandelions poetic? I agree that they are, but why are they poetic to you?

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